Just wanted to finish and upload a random page, so maybe you can give me some tips or tell me what you like or don't like... xD Just don't... overthink it, lmaooo x'D
I would appreciate it to get some constructiveness, but it is not required >w< I do hope you like it...
myself, I am not very happy with it xD Too many failures if you ask me.
The 6th panel has my handwriting because I saw no point in translating "uuh" seeing as it would be the same... yeah... xD
Not too happy with this, I just don't like how Hugo came out. D: I like his face, but his anatomy is all messed up, bah xD And I am just so annoyed with the 7th panel... x'D He's just drunk, staring out into space, thinking absolutely nothing :U Too random.
Bah. So this is a page from oooone of my stories...
Kai's first time getting drunk actually... I don't think he's ever really been drunk, but Hugo took him partying... so... xD Rajita was supposed to come but she got hold up, and she is usually the one who considers how much everyone are drinking...
There is a green hue to everything because the place has green glowing light... why do I feel like I need to explain that? x'D agh.
Well, now... the story goes sort of like this... when Hugo and Kai wakes up after a night of crazy partying to realize they've not only broken in and crashed in a strange house, but they've also killed the family that lives there. They try to hide the fact that they've done this from everyone. Hugo is filled with guilt and feels beyond terrible and he insists on turning himself and Kai in, but Kai refuses to let that happen, and does what he needs to do to keep Hugo silent.
It is pretty clear that they did commit these murders, but could there be another part to this story?
Yeah, um... more stuff happens, and I have a longer summary... but, I have little time to write. Going for dinner at grandma's house now. 8D But... if you don't approve of such stories(not all of them contain killings and bad stuff, don't worry xD) then just tell me. I am making a great variety of stories, so.. xD
This page is probably unfinished somehow... I don't even know... I like the first panel xD Oh, right! The text in the first panel says "Later..." I forgot to translate that
And yeah, I am still trying to get a name for the story... got nothing solid yet xD
Hugo, Kai, all characters, Tragic Territory(c)*Floetepus